From: YAMAZAKI, Koiti [koiti@chance.cti.co.jp]
Sent: Wednesday, October 30, 2002 05:24
To: Everson, Michael
Cc: KIMURA, Toshiko; YAMAZAKI, Koiti; Hart, Edwin F; Aliprand, Joan
Subject: Comments on FDIS2375

Dear Mr. Everson,

Japan is going to approve the FDIS2375.
However, I have some editorial comments on it.
Therefore I inform you them by personal e-mail.

Comment-1, Clause 2, 1st paragraph
Change
    this document
for
    this International Standard.

Comment-2, Clause 4.2, 1st paragraph
Change
    the internet
for
    the Internet.

Comment-3,
    Clause 5, tail of the paragraph
    Clause 17.1.2, 2nd sentence
    Clause 18.4.1
    Clause 18.4.2
    Annex B.3
Change
    the register
for
    the International Register.

Comment-4,
    Clause 6.2.3, 2nd sentence
    Clause 6.2.4, 2nd sentence
Change
    the register
for
    this register.

Comment-5, Clause 14.3
Change
    the International register
for
    the International Register.

Comment-6, Annex A.2.14
Change
    "Practices of the Registration Authority"
for
    "Practice of the Registration Authority".

Comment-7, Clause 6.2.4, 1st sentence
Change
    a paper copy
for
    a paper or electronic copy
or
    a copy.

Comment-8, Clause 14.2, 1st sentence
Change
    make the mapping available in machine-readable form
for
    make the mapping in machine-readable form available
    over the Internet.

--end of comments--

Best regards,

YAMAZAKI, Koiti
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